Saturday, February 20, 2016

Local Revisions: Tense Usage

Here are the verbs from my previous post, organized into various tenses:


Past                           Present                             Future


advertised                  does-2                             capture
carried                       present-2                          gain
gathered-2                 associate                          argue
claimed                     stretch                              support
classified                   manufacturing                 investigate
charged-2                  advertise                          deliberate
played                       claiming                           increase -2
viewed                      suffering                           aid
judged                       trying                                help
presented                  cope                                  challenge
exaggerated               sell                                   fund
subscribed                 taking                               speak
launched                   emphasize                         conduct
blamed                      stem                                  find
conducted                 exposing                           protect
founded                    span                                  give
approached               shows                               send
participated              want                                  supply
supplied                   serve                                 cancel
supported                 ignoring                            tell
described                  inform                              receive
made-4                     protecting                         allow
decided                     cheat
solicited                   exists
settled                      states
paid                          acts
                                face
                                focuses
                                including
                                mandates
                                explaining
                                defends
                                stating
                                admitting
                                deceiving
                                questioning
                               buying
                                looking
                                saving
                                wasting-2
                                pushes

The most prevalent tense in my draft is past tense. This is most likely because I am telling a story that already happened. Tense provides the perspective in which the content will make sense in. There is a big difference in something that could happen in the future and something that already happened. This is important for connecting the past and the future, as the author trying to convey bigger picture ideas.


I think my verb usage flows well for the most part. As I was rereading the draft, I felt reassured with the transitions. Also, as I was making the blog posts related to these verbs, the different tenses were placed in various places in the draft, never being clumped together.


I feel like I have a good amount of present tense verbs. I really tried to connect what had happened to what could happen in the future. Using present tense verbs helped be bridge this gap.

                Robbiemuffin. "EGG Past simple". May 2008. Creative Commons Attribution

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